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February 28, 2010

Mummy’s Ghost, The

Mummy's Ghost, The
Mummy’s Ghost, The (1944)

IMDB rating: 5.20

Plot: An Egyptian high priest (John Carradine) travels to America to reclaim the bodies of ancient Egyptian princess Ananka and her living guardian mummy Kharis (Lon Chaney Jr.). Learning that Ananka^Os spirit has been reincarnated into another body, he kidnaps a young woman of Egyptian descent with a mysterious resemblance to the princess. However, the high priest^Os greedy desires cause him to loose control of the mummy…

find and download Mummy’s Ghost, The in iPod/iPhone quaity

Directors: Le Borg Reginald

Actors: Carradine John,Lowery Robert,MacLane Barton,Zucco George,Reicher Frank,Shannon Harry,Vogan Emmett,Sharpe Lester,O’Shea Oscar,Chaney Jr. Lon,Barclay Steve,Bruce David,Horror,

These are always pretty fun, Music Survey(?)?
Put your iPod on shuffle and whatever song that pops up relates to the question….

How am I feeling today? Last Caress- Misfits
How do my friends see me? Viva Las Vegas- Dead Kennedys
What is my best friend’s theme song? I wanna be your dog (siouxsie cover)
What is the story of my life? Sweet Nothing- Wanda Jackson (haha)
What is the best thing about me? Old Friend- Rancid
What is today going to be like? Go Go Mummy- Zombie Ghost Train
What is in store for this week? Day By Day- Generation X
What song describes my mom? Depression- Black flag (niceee)
What song describes my dad? Liquor Store- Devil Doll (hahahah)
To describe my grandparents? Bankrobber- The Clash
How is my life going? Whiskey Bar- The Doors(ha)
What song will they play at my funeral? Police Story- Black Flag
How does the world see me? Gimme Gimme Gimme- Black Flag
Will I have a happy life? Main Man- The Ramones
What do my friends really think of me? Ready Steady Go- Generation x (haha)
How can I make myself happy? I Don’t Wanna- Sham 69
What should I do with my life? Drug Me-Dead Kennedys (hahaha great)
What is some good advice for me? Madhatter- the adicts
How will i be remembered? Feeding the addiction-Suicidal Tendencies (hahha, the fact that i’ll be remembered by a ST song itself, let alone it being Feeding the Addiction, haha)
What is my signature dancing song? Down In Mexico-The Coasters (haha, oh memories)
What is my current theme song? Guilty Of Being White- Minor Threat (hahah)
What does everyone else think my current theme song is? Caress Me Down- Sublime (haha!)

LIFE STORY:
Opening Credits: Message to Rudy- The Specials
Waking Up: Anarchy for Sale -Dead Kennedys
First Day At School: Superstat- Sonic youth
Falling In Love: Little Friend- Minor Threat (ahha)
Fight Song: Get it on- T Rex
Breaking Up: Should I stay or should i go- the clash (haha that worked out to well)
Prom: I wanna Be Sedated- Ramones (haha basically)
Life’s OK: Da Doo Ron Ron- the crystals
Mental Breakdown: american nightmare- misfits (haha)
Driving: Vampire- 7 Shot Screamers
Flashback: She’s the one- Ramones
Getting Back Together: The Crusher- Ramones
Wedding: Jack the Stripper- Nekromantix (ahaha)
Birth of Child: where eagles dare- misfits
Final Battle: white minority- minor threat (hahahha great)
Death Scene: louie louie- the kingsmen
Funeral Song: Lovely- Suicidal Tendencies (hahahah)
End Credits: Crawl Straight Home- Horrorpops

What song describes my mood right now? Come back traci- sloppy seconds
What song do I listen to when Im depressed? Victim- The Germs
Happy? Hooker- 7 shot screamers (haha)
Scared? american waste- black flag
Bored? Szara rzecywistosc- Dezerter
Dust N’ Bones- Have you heard the Rocket from the tombs-ain’t it fun? I think it was actually the orriginal, it was the band Cheetah was in before the dead boys
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PExEDuGKD o4
My Pet Hand Grenade is named Ali- forget to change the last part? lol


How am I feeling today? All Apologies- Nirvana
How do my friends see me? School- Nirvana
What is my best friend’s theme song? The Joker- Steve Miller Band (So True lol)
What is the story of my life? Drain You- Nirvana
What is the best thing about me? Stupid Kid- Alkaline Trio (I Knew it!)
What is today going to be like? Ladies and Gentlemen- Saliva
What is in store for this week? Inside the Fire- Disturbed
What song describes my mom? Sliver- Nirvana
What song describes my dad? The King of Rock N’ Roll- Daniel Lioneye (Viva la Bam theme) (He wishes lol)
To describe my grandparents? Beautiful- 10 Years (Think Again)
How is my life going? Youth of the Nation- P.O.D.
What song will they play at my funeral? Man Overboard- Blink-182 (haha, drowning lol)
How does the world see me? In Bloom- Nirvana
Will I have a happy life? Crawl- Breaking Benjamin
What do my friends really think of me? Are You Gonna Be My Girl- JET
How can I make myself happy? 45- Shinedown
What should I do with my life? The Good Life- Three Days Grace
What is some good advice for me? The Dirt Whispered- Rise Against (Ok?)
How will i be remembered? Give Me a Sign- Breaking Benjamin
What is my signature dancing song? Boyz In The Hood- Eazy E
What is my current theme song? Jump- Van Halen (YES!!!)
What does everyone else think my current theme song is? Sell Your Soul- Hollywood Undead

LIFE STORY:
Opening Credits: You Know You’re Right- Nirvana (YES!!!)
Waking Up: Stop! Before It’s To Late And We’ve Destroyed It All- Atreyu (Haha)
First Day At School: Hero of War- Rise Against
Falling In Love: Coffin Nails- Atreyu (Ok?)
Fight Song: Her Voice Resides- Bullet For My Valentine
Breaking Up: Injection- Rise Against
Prom: Ravenous- Atreyu
Life’s OK: First Date- Blink-182
Mental Breakdown: Save Me- Shinedown (Haha)
Driving: Whiplash- Metallica
Flashback: Four Words(To Choke Upon)- Bullet For My Valentine
Getting Back Together: Starting Over- Killswitch Engage (Haha)
Wedding: You’re Ever So Inviting- Underoath
Birth of Child: Gallows- Atreyu (Why does Atreyu keep Ruining My Life lol)
Final Battle: Afterlife- Avenged Sevenfold
Death Scene: Heart-Shaped Box- Nirvana
Funeral Song: Beat It- Fall Out Boy (MJ Cover) (Tht sux lol)
End Credits: Sound of Madness- Shinedown

What song describes my mood right now? Last To Know- Three Days Grace
What song do I listen to when Im depressed? Drowning(Face Down)- Saving Abel
Happy? The Middle- Jimmy Eat World
Scared? Tears Don’t Fall- Bullet For My Valentine
Bored? Give It All- Rise Against

Nevermind, I have no complaints | Dec 08, 2009


tl;dr
Elements | Dec 08, 2009


I don’t think so.
? Arinna ? | Dec 08, 2009


I love your taste in music!!!
choppers | Dec 08, 2009


How am I feeling today? This Could Be Love – Alkaline Trio
How do my friends see me? Cliche Guevara – Against me!
What is my best friend’s theme song? Confessions Of An Economic Hitman – Anti-Flag
What is the story of my life? Power To The Peaceful – Anti-Flag
What is the best thing about me? Disarm – Smashing Pumpkins
What is today going to be like? The Good Left Undone – Rise Against
What is in store for this week? Permanent Rust – No Use For A Name
What song describes my mom? One People, One Struggle – Anti-Flag
What song describes my dad? 21 Guns – Green Day
To describe my grandparents? Fallen Leaves – Billy Talent
How is my life going? This Is the First Night – Anti-Flag
What song will they play at my funeral? Why Walk On Wter When We’ve Got Boats – A Day To Remember
How does the world see me? All Apologies – Nirvana
Will I have a happy life? Island in the Sun – Weezer
What do my friends really think of me? 5-3-10-4 – Alkaline Trio
How can I make myself happy? She – Green Day
What should I do with my life? Lady In the Blue Dress – Senses Fail
What is some good advice for me? I Lied My Face Off – Alkaline Trio
How will i be remembered? The Unraveling – Rise Against
What is my signature dancing song? Seeing Double At The Triple Rock – NOFX
What is my current theme song? Coming Clean – Green Day
What does everyone else think my current theme song is? Montauk – Bayside

LIFE STORY:
Opening Credits: They’re Not Horses, They’re Unicorns – Bayside
Waking Up: Film Noir – Gaslight Anthem
First Day At School: In Bloom – Nirvana
Falling In Love: Why Don’t You get A Job? – The Offspring
Fight Song: Franco Un-American – NOFX
Breaking Up: American Jesus – Bad Religion
Prom: I Wanna Be Sedated – the Ramones
Life’s OK: Devil In A Midnight Mass – Billy Talent
Mental Breakdown: the Approaching Curve – Rise Against
Driving: Hash Pipe – Weezer
Flashback: I Don’t Wanna Grow Up – Descendents
Getting Back Together: Aliens Exist – blink-182
Wedding: 60% – NOFX
Birth of Child: Party Down – Reel Big Fish
Final Battle: The First Drop – Rise Against
Death Scene: Player Hater Anthem – The Loved Ones
Funeral Song: First Date – blink-182
End Credits: Sitting Ducks – No Use For A Name

What song describes my mood right now? Dinosaurs Will Die – NOFX
What song do I listen to when Im depressed? Healthy Body – Operation Ivy
Happy? Jude Law & A Semester Abroad – Brand New
Scared? Steven – Senses Fail
Bored? Obvious – blink-182
randumb | Dec 08, 2009


How am I feeling today? I Love It Loud – Kiss
How do my friends see me? I Wanted Everything – Ramones
What is my best friend’s theme song? Boys – The Beatles
What is the story of my life? Plug In Baby – Muse
What is the best thing about me? Blister In the Sun – Violent Femmes
What is today going to be like? Anything Goes – GN’R
What is in store for this week? Polytheme Pam – Beatles
What song describes my mom? Hotel California – Eagles
What song describes my dad? Soldier of Love – Pearl Jam (cover)
To describe my grandparents? Hey Little Girl – Dead Boys
How is my life going? Patience – GN’R
What song will they play at my funeral? You Give Love a Bad Name – Bon Jovi… great a Bon Jovi song at my funeral… and it had to be that one…
How does the world see me? Bleed the Freak – Alice In Chains
Will I have a happy life? Koka Kola – The Clash
What do my friends really think of me? The Conjuring – Megadeth
How can I make myself happy? Whatever Gets You Through the Night – John Lennon lol
What should I do with my life? Light My Fire – The Doors haha!
What is some good advice for me? Starlight – Muse
How will i be remembered? Tumble in the Rough – Stone Temple Pilots
What is my signature dancing song? Mama Kin – Aerosmith
What is my current theme song? All the Young Punks (New Boots and Contracts) – The Clash.. that is my theme song! :P
What does everyone else think my current theme song is? You Really Got a Hold On Me – Beatles (cover)

LIFE STORY:
Opening Credits: Master of Puppets – Metallica
Waking Up: Ivan Meets G.I. Joe – The Clash
First Day At School: And Your Bird Can Sing – Beatles
Falling In Love: Dogs – Pink Floyd.. great
Fight Song: To Know Her Is to Love Her – Beatles (cover) seriously what’s up with all these repated bands..
Breaking Up: The Bakery – Arctic Monkeys aww
Prom: Enjoy the Silence – Depeche Mode hahaha thanks.
Life’s OK: Bad Apples – GNR
Mental Breakdown: Run For Your Life – Beatles :P
Driving: I Am a Poseur – X-Ray Spex
Flashback: The Continuing Story of Bungalow Bill – Beatles
Getting Back Together: Don’t Pass Me By – Beatles
Wedding: Eye – Smashing Pumpkins
Birth of Child: Brown Sugar – Rolling Stones lol
Final Battle: Bitter Tears – INXS :P
Death Scene: Good Night – Beatles… how fitting…
Funeral Song: Piece of Pie – Stone Temple Pilots haha
End Credits: Four Horsemen – The Clash

What song describes my mood right now? Breed – Nirvana lol
What song do I listen to when Im depressed? U.S.I. – The Boys lol that’s the most upbeat song in the world…
Happy? Go – Pearl Jam
Scared? Flying – Beatles
Bored? Ain’t It Fun – Guns N’ Roses (Dead Boys originally)

Btw I love your music :D
Dust N' Bones | Dec 08, 2009


How am I feeling today? Out Of Control – Hoobastank
How do my friends see me? Perfect Insanity – Distubed
What is my best friend’s theme song? First Call- NOFX
What is the story of my life? Alive – Papa Roach
What is the best thing about me? 10 miles wide- Escape the fate
What is today going to be like? 4 words to choke upon- Bullet for My Valentine
What is in store for this week? Walk with me in Hell- Lamb of god
What song describes my mom? Six (all that remains)
What song describes my dad? Stupify- Disturbed
To describe my grandparents? No rain- Blind Melon
How is my life going? Inside the fire- Disturbed
What song will they play at my funeral? For what it’s worth (rise against cover)
How does the world see me? Perfect Insanity- Disturbed
Will I have a happy life? Getting away with murder- Papa roach
What do my friends really think of me? I am hated- Slipknot
How can I make myself happy? Animals (nikelback)
What should I do with my life? 30/30-150 – stone sour
What is some good advice for me? Seize the day- avenged sevenfold
How will i be remembered? made of scars- Stone Sour
What is my signature dancing song? Down with the sickness- Disturbed (i had a routine to that lol)
What is my current theme song? Crash- Papa Roach
What does everyone else think my current theme song is? Lacrymosa – evanescence

LIFE STORY:
Opening Credits: Injection- Rise Against
Waking Up: worst day ever- simple plan
First Day At School: Stop looking- Papa Roach
Falling In Love: Ridiculous- bowling for soup
Fight Song: the air that i breathe- all that remains
Breaking Up: chiron- all that remains
Prom: Young Lust- Aerosmith
Life’s OK: Bullet with butterfly wings- smshing pumpkins
Mental Breakdown: Let it Out- hoobastank
Driving: Ironic- Alanis Morisette
Flashback: Whatshername- green Day
Getting Back Together: Dirty Little Secret- All American Rejects
Wedding: Maria- Greenday
Birth of Child: Under the knife- rise against
Final Battle: Two weeks- all that remains
Death Scene: extrordinary girl- green day
Funeral Song: Haunting somewhere in time- kamelot
End Credits: Survive Rise against lol

What song describes my mood right now? Come back traci- sloppy seconds
What song do I listen to when Im depressed? Victim- The Germs
Happy? Hooker- 7 shot screamers (haha)
Scared? american waste- black flag
Bored? Szara rzecywistosc- Dezerter
My Pet Hand Grenade is named Ali | Dec 08, 2009


How am I feeling today? I Put A Spell On You – Creedence Clearwater Revival
How do my friends see me? Tears In Heaven – Eric Clapton
What is my best friend’s theme song? Milk It – Nirvana
What is the story of my life? Epic – Faith No More
What is the best thing about me? Blood For Blood – Machine Head
What is today going to be like? Poison Was The Cure – Megadeth
What is in store for this week? Swap Meet – Nirvana
What song describes my mom? Warning – Incubus
What song describes my dad? Greedy Fly – Bush
To describe my grandparents? Linger – The Cranberries
How is my life going? Dam That River – Alice In Chains
What song will they play at my funeral? Don’t Look Back In Anger – Oasis
How does the world see me? Welcome Home (Sanitarium) – Metallica
Will I have a happy life? N.I.B. – Black Sabbath
What do my friends really think of me? Crosstown Traffic – Jimi Hendrix
How can I make myself happy? Medusa – Anthrax
What should I do with my life? Right Now – Babes In Toyland
What is some good advice for me? Everlong – Foo Fighters
How will i be remembered? Bad Moon Rising – Creedence Clearwater Revival
What is my signature dancing song? Killing Yourself To Live – Black Sabbath (lol)
What is my current theme song? California Dreaming – Mama’s And The Papa’s
What does everyone else think my current theme song is? I Am The Law – Anthrax

LIFE STORY:
Opening Credits: Teenage Whore – Hole (haha)
Waking Up: Cowboys From Hell – Pantera
First Day At School: Black – Pearl Jam
Falling In Love: Scentless Apprentice – Nirvana
Fight Song: Take No Prisoners – Megadeth
Breaking Up: Shame In You – Alice In Chains
Prom: Black Sabbath – Black Sabbath
Life’s OK: Tribute – Tenacious D
Mental Breakdown: Just – Radiohead
Driving: Pretty Noose – Soundgarden
Flashback: The Sound Of Silence – Simon And Garfunkel
Getting Back Together: No Suprises – Radiohead
Wedding: Heaven And Hell – Black Sabbath
Birth of Child: Nice To Know You – Incubus
Final Battle: Talk Show Host – Radiohead
Death Scene: Nobody But You – The Black Keys
Funeral Song: Crazy Train – Ozzy Osbourne
End Credits: Hollow – Pantera

What song describes my mood right now? Plush – Stone Temple Pilots
What song do I listen to when Im depressed? 10’s – Pantera
Happy? Show Me The Way – Peter Frampton
Scared? Uplift – Pantera
Bored? Suicide Messiah – Black Label Society
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February 27, 2010

White Noise

White Noise
White Noise (2005)

IMDB rating: 5.30

Plot: When the unexpected happens, architect Jonathan Rivers has become a grieving widower, wallowing in deep confusion over the death of his wife. But a paranormal expert approaches Jonathan with the unlikely: the ability to hear his wife from beyond the grave. Through a form of unusual communication known as EVP (Electronic Voice Phenomenon), Jonathan will finally be able to see his wife. But in doing so, Jonathan has drawn himself into a much more complex situation when his curiosity becomes an obsession. Only that obsession will have him confront those not of this world, and some of them don’t approve of Jonathan’s interference with their destructive nature.

Directors: Sax Geoffrey

Actors: Keaton Michael,McNeice Ian,Elia Nicholas,Dopud Mike,Sihvon Brad,Kosterman Mitchell,Gold L. Harvey,Drama,Horror,Mystery,Sci-Fi,Thriller,

My PS2 slim won't load this game?
So, I used to have a "large" PS2 and it broke, and I got my uncle’s PS2 slim and it works and plays all the games he gave me and what not, but when I try to play Guitar Hero 2, it loads up and the white "Playstation 2" on the black background comes up with that noise but then it turns and stays a black screen. The disk is fine and I used a disk cleaner with soft disk cleaning cloth on it and it still won’t load. It looks like a silver disk. Please help, and thanks!
I completely sprayed the whole thing down with compressed air, and still no results. Also, it makes a weird almost ticking sound when it is on the black screen.


get a ps3 already
Colin W | Feb 08, 2010


After a long time ps2 start to reject certain disks and even if the disk is Perfect my old one stopped playing certain games all cds and dvds. Sorry nothing you can really do but get a new ps2 or upgrade to a PS3.
RoGeR 88 | Feb 08, 2010

White Noise

White Noise
White Noise (2005)

IMDB rating: 5.30

Plot: When the unexpected happens, architect Jonathan Rivers has become a grieving widower, wallowing in deep confusion over the death of his wife. But a paranormal expert approaches Jonathan with the unlikely: the ability to hear his wife from beyond the grave. Through a form of unusual communication known as EVP (Electronic Voice Phenomenon), Jonathan will finally be able to see his wife. But in doing so, Jonathan has drawn himself into a much more complex situation when his curiosity becomes an obsession. Only that obsession will have him confront those not of this world, and some of them don’t approve of Jonathan’s interference with their destructive nature.

Directors: Sax Geoffrey

Actors: Keaton Michael,McNeice Ian,Elia Nicholas,Dopud Mike,Sihvon Brad,Kosterman Mitchell,Gold L. Harvey,Drama,Horror,Mystery,Sci-Fi,Thriller,

My PS2 slim won't load this game?
So, I used to have a "large" PS2 and it broke, and I got my uncle’s PS2 slim and it works and plays all the games he gave me and what not, but when I try to play Guitar Hero 2, it loads up and the white "Playstation 2" on the black background comes up with that noise but then it turns and stays a black screen. The disk is fine and I used a disk cleaner with soft disk cleaning cloth on it and it still won’t load. It looks like a silver disk. Please help, and thanks!
I completely sprayed the whole thing down with compressed air, and still no results. Also, it makes a weird almost ticking sound when it is on the black screen.


get a ps3 already
Colin W | Feb 08, 2010


After a long time ps2 start to reject certain disks and even if the disk is Perfect my old one stopped playing certain games all cds and dvds. Sorry nothing you can really do but get a new ps2 or upgrade to a PS3.
RoGeR 88 | Feb 08, 2010

February 26, 2010

House of Fury

Filed under: Uncategorized — Tags: , , , , , , , , , — jeromejackson1951 @ 8:42 am

House of Fury
House of Fury (2005)

IMDB rating: 6.30

Plot: Teddy Yu is a former secret agent turned chiropractor who thought he left his past behind. He teaches martial arts to his two kids. However, his past catches up to him as a rogue agent demands to know the whereabouts of an agent known as Dragon. Now, father and children must team up to stop the rogue agent and his goons.

buy online House of Fury and download

Directors: Fung Stephen

Actors: Wong Chau-Sang Anthony,Wong Michael,Wu Daniel,Wu Ma,Strickland Jake,Foo Jon,Ng Philip,Comedy,Action,

Do you like my writing style?
These are just little blurb of ideas from the top of my head. What do you think about my style? Only constructive criticism please.

1st Person Point of View:

I was mad, infuriated actually. My head was throbbing and none of their useless bickering would stop! This and that, you did this, well yea you did that, just needed to stop. The world could be falling apart for all I knew, and I didn’t do anything to stop it because I couldn’t think through the noise that was being emitted into this room. Monica’s voice screeched the loudest, "You disgusting rat! I don’t know why Zack ever wanted you." But of course, Jealous 1 and Jealous 2 were fighting over Zack Eversteen, hot-shot school wizardry rock star. Before Kayla could say anything back I freaked out on them. I stood up on the chair shouting, projecting my voice through out the room. "Monica and Kayla shut the hell up about Zack already! We all know he’s not interested in anyone right now, so shut up!" I heard Becca chuckle, I swerved to face her as well. "Don’t act like you wouldn’t being the same thing." My face was hot with fury, I could keep going on until I saw Jake enter the room. My heart skipped a few beats, and my rant abruptly ended. "Everyone just shut up and be quiet." I felt my face get even hotter as Jake approached me. His smile was radiant and brilliant like a movie stars. Ohmygosh, I could not believe he was mine. "Hey baby girl. Blew up on you’re friends I see." I noticed him take a glance around the room. Everyone was slouching in their seats or trying to hide themselves in the darkness. I went numb inside, how could I be that cruel? Jake caressed his hand to my cheek, and more of the red bodily fluid rushed up into my already rosy cheeks; allowing me to forget about everything else in the room. I was solely focused on him and I; us. But still, I swear I am still not used to having someone as amazing as Jake around.

3rd Person Point of View:

Elliot looked around the room, she didn’t know what to do. How could she even start to explain the unfortunate events that occurred that evening? Worried, she began pacing the halls, repetitively passing the stairwell over and over again. Elliot knew she would eventually have to go up into the attic to face the bloody mess that awaited her. On an onslaught Elliot had just murdered four innocent people. All of them which she had sworn to protect. A pessimistic floated around her mind, Oh gee Elle look what we have done. Heaven is not accepting us back, or another "self controlled" vampyre back ever. Feeling panicky as the voice of the elders were reaching to her, beads of sweat were rolling down her face faster than ever. The lights flickered and at the very moment she was killed. The lights kept on flickering in that house until the power finally failed. No one came to investigate. No one cared about Elliot Westover. It was a plan set in stone from the moment she was born, that forgotten Elliot Had to die. And the elders knew exactly how.

So that was all I could scrounge up from the top of my head for yah. Constructive Criticism please.

Thanks muchh. :)


Your Answer:
First off, let me explain that I have an undergraduate degree in professional writing and I have worked as a writer and an editor. I will try to be gentle in this critique. You need to to focus a little on proper punctuation, as well as maintaining voice and tense agreement. Also, lose the thesaurus — you’ve got words in there that don’t sound like they would come from the characters. You’ve got some ideas that are worth keeping there, but it seems that,at times, you have forgotten to write about what you know. Use language that you are comfortable with — as your writting matures, so will the vocabulary and usage.

I’ve grabbed a couple of sentences to break apart here and rewrote for you.

<B> <I>"Jake caressed his hand to my cheek"</i> </B> Try Jake caressed my cheek with his hand. Caressed does not lend itself to the use of the to preposition, unless you say something like "I used his hand to caress the cat" which is an absolutely silly way to express that action.

<B> <I> "and more of the red bodily fluid" </i> </B>Red bodily fluid? try being simple and use the word blood.

<B> <I>rushed up into my already rosy cheeks;</i> </B>" Lose "rushed up into", very wordy to no purpose. Go with something simpler — flooded or engourged (if you want to use a fancy word).
<B> <I>Rosy cheeks </i> </B>? If this is in first person, how would she know her cheeks were rosy? How about hot, or I could feel myself blushing already.

Lose the semi colon — that is a mark of a second independent thought that is in contradiction of the first thought. Also, semi colons are best kept to academic papers, not novels or first person experience. Start with a new sentence: I forgot about everything else — more direct, active voice.

<B><i>"Allowing" </i> </B> needs to be changed. In the case of first person usage, it should be used in the sense of "I allowed myself to go limp," or "Allowing myself to go limo, I fell into his arms."

Don’t use <B><i>me</i> </B> when you are in the character’s head, unless you are writing in an English dialect "I noticed I forgot me mum."

Here’s a rewrite of that sentence:
Jake caressed my warm cheek with his hand. I felt a deep glow as my blood rushed to where his hand had been. Everything else in the room vanished from my mind, leaving only us.

MystiqueLady | Jan 25, 2010


From one author, to a future one. Yes,your writing style is VERY creavtive. I think one place you could start at would be quizilla.com I have an account and OMG its sooo much fun. I love it very much. When you get a quizillla account…add me Im cap6239 Enjoy

My One and Only

My One and Only
My One and Only (2009)

IMDB rating: 7.50

Plot: A 1950s-set comedy in which the glamorous Anne Deveraux (Zellweger) embarks on a drive down the Eastern Seaboard in a quixotic search for a wealthy man to fund a new life for her and her sons.

Directors: Loncraine Richard

Actors: Noth Chris,Bacon Kevin,Bowerman Matthew,Addabbo Anthony,Alban Michael,Blumenstock Michael,Chreky Jean-Paul,Di Salvo Christian,Ferguson Liam,Ferro Daniel,Garity Troy,Gentry Bill,Ginsberg Maury,Comedy,

What was driving this teacher who taped a boy's mouth shut?
An item that remains indelibly burned into my memory from my school days is how my 4th grade teacher kept a boy’s mouth taped shut. I’ve never understood, what was driving her, anyway??

There was this one boy in our 4th grade class who never knew when to stop talking. He was always talking in class, whispering, interrupting. And our teacher kept getting after him about it. Finally one day she brought to school a metal spool of 2 inch wide Johnson and Johnson adhesive tape, and she taped his mouth shut with several pieces of tape. And she kept his mouth taped shut all day.

And it worked. He wasn’t able to talk. He could only make a few noises. Mostly he was silent.

It worked, but only as long as his mouth was sealed. So pretty soon our teacher adhesive taped his mouth shut all day again. And again. And again. And again. And again.

It got at last to where she just had it with that boy. So from then on, he spent the rest of 4th grade with his mouth taped shut, all day long every day. No more talking. First thing every morning when he arrived in the classroom, the teacher taped his mouth shut with 2 inch wide Johnson and Johnson. And, except perhaps for a brief silent lunch, she kept his mouth adhesive taped shut all day. Every day for the rest of the school year.

This happened back in the 60’s, when a teacher could still discipline a student, and nobody ever imagined she might get into trouble over it. Still, looking back I’ve never been able to figure out, what in the world was driving that teacher??!


How the fuck are we supposed to know we weren’t there.
KingMan | Feb 08, 2010


What was driving her? Maintaining discipline in the classroom. Now days they would say that boy had ADHD and would dope him up.
Shane A | Feb 08, 2010

February 25, 2010

Street Fighter: The Legend of Chun-Li

Street Fighter: The Legend of Chun-Li
Street Fighter: The Legend of Chun-Li (2009)

IMDB rating: 4.10

Plot: Based on the popular video game franchise, female fighter Chun Li embarks on a quest for justice.

Directors: Bartkowiak Andrzej

Actors: Achabbakhe Brahim,Chen Edmund,Duncan Michael Clarke,Eric Cullet,Klein Chris,Man Tim,McDonough Neal,Miller Brendan,Shou Robin,Taboo,Action,Adventure,Sci-Fi,Thriller,

what did you think of street fighter the legend of chun li? (the movie)?
i saw the UNRATED version and i was suprised. It had more violent parts then the thertical version. That part were M. Bison ripes open his wife’s stomach for the baby was NASTY. The movie was all together pretty dumb, i think they should have made a remake of the old street fighter movie. What did you think of it? i did LOVE Vega though, when he sliced those japenise guys and riped there heads off.
well it wasn’t THAT bad…….


It was awful. One of the worst movies released this year.

BIGDADDYCOOL | Jul 25, 2009


Honestly it was the worst movie in the world, if only Yuen Wo Ping was the kung fu choreographer for this movie, it will be better, even Blood: The last vampire was far far better than street fighter movie
6545 | Jul 25, 2009

February 24, 2010

Snake Eyes

Snake Eyes
Snake Eyes (1998)

IMDB rating: 5.80

Plot: After the assassination of a prominent political official at a major boxing match, a corrupt cop must solve the crime to protect his friend, who was overseeing protection of the fallen. But what the cop uncovers is a conspiracy connected to everyone that was at the boxing match that night, and the one woman who knows everything must run from those behind the murder.

Directors: De Palma Brian

Actors: Cage Nicolas,Sinise Gary,Heard John,Shaw Stan,Dunn Kevin,Rispoli Michael,Fabiani Joel,Guzman Luis,Higgins David Anthony,Starr Mike,Zien Chip,Bernardo Paul Joseph,Crime,Drama,Mystery,Thriller,

RHH:Check out a new mind bending verse?
Im not cocky, i state facts lol. Im kinda drunk and was listening to Qwel all day, so i decided to jot a verse down with some wordplay. RATE OR HATE BUT DONT DISCRIMINATE!

my language involves high frequencies and encrypted digits
so i dont expect you to hear or understand these lyrics
a genious leavin eyes followin me like flies to the light
a vortex of scythes style undefined like the universes size
therefore it cant be plagirized by mannequins who write
i dont believe in flesh so you cant fight, what you cant see
im like your shadow always be creepin behind your feet
cant take these clowns seriously with nitrous oxide speech
they got nothing on this di-versity like the coral reef
take a seat and watch the chief, summon nature’s power
hurricanes tidal waves any way to get ur sh*t devoured
higher than meteor showers, older than the tree of life
have more rhymes than the amount of bytes in a zettabyte
you got a gripe i got a grip on this pen im not stoppin
as long as heads bobbin to the music and not apples
robbin the snakes knowledge thats why im never rattled
RHH2:
Whats your favorite album by a Typical Cat member?
@nexx
1. ‘leavin eyes followin me like flies to the light’-flies are attracted to light, not genious leavin eyes.

2.scythe was random i know, im a lazy f*ck.

3.’i dont believe in flesh so you cant fight, what you cant see’- it has to do with quantum physics and metaphysics where it states nothing is solid, therefore achieving non physical state is possible in a sense. thats why im ‘like your shadow’

4. The di-versity thing is for flow, i break off where the hyphen is


10 that is some lyrical siht

rate my recording

http://www.zshare.net/download/72322463e d472c3c/
mc-eye-of-irish in da houseeeeee | Feb 08, 2010


savage lyrics my man!
JimBob | Feb 08, 2010


I’m not feelin all of it, so I’ll break it down line by line.

"my language involves high frequencies and encrypted digits
so i dont expect you to hear or understand these lyrics"
This part was good

"a genious leavin eyes followin me like flies to the light
a vortex of scythes style undefined like the universes size"
A genious leavin eyes? What’s that supposed to me? I’m lost. And "a vortex of scythes" is a useless line. It’s just thrown in there randomly, it’s not actually a part of any of the words before or after it. Get what I’m saying?

"therefore it cant be plagirized by mannequins who write
i dont believe in flesh so you cant fight, what you cant see"
How does you not believing in flesh lead to them not being able to see you? Line doesn’t make sense.

"im like your shadow always be creepin behind your feet
cant take these clowns seriously with nitrous oxide speech
they got nothing on this di-versity like the coral reef"
First 2 lines were pretty good, nothing stellar. If the "di-versity" was supposed to be a pun on dive, it’s kind of a stupid line. If there was some other wordplay there, I missed it.

"take a seat and watch the chief, summon nature’s power
hurricanes tidal waves any way to get ur sh*t devoured"
Decent. Not really mindbending

"higher than meteor showers, older than the tree of life
have more rhymes than the amount of bytes in a zettabyte"
Decent again, nothing special.

"you got a gripe i got a grip on this pen im not stoppin
as long as heads bobbin to the music and not apples
robbin the snakes knowledge thats why im never rattled"
Good finish, liked the wordplay there.

Overall I’m disappointed with this. I remember listening to one of your verses before and it was very good. This… not so much. You can do better.

RHH2: Don’t know em.
NexxJordan | Feb 08, 2010


mucho gusto

RHH2:
Qwel – If It Ain’t Been In A Pawn Shop, Then It Can’t Play The Blues

Mech says that So Be It is good, so i might have to listen to that.
___Huey___ IS OVER 9000!!! | Feb 08, 2010


ooooh damn your rhymes are nice son 9/10
Carl | Feb 08, 2010


have more rhymes than the amount of bytes in a zettabyte

"yo, dawg, not feeling that one line dawg. it kind of threw the whole thing off for me sorrry, maybe next time"- randy jackson of american idol
Truly Beats, Rhymes and Knives! | Feb 08, 2010


Some of the best wordplay I’ve saw on here. 9/10. Great verse.

RHH2: Dark Day & So Be It right now.
[M. Thought Escher]– [Mi Amor] | Feb 08, 2010


hahahaha omg dope, miles beyond anyone on this site and mostly beyond that last stuff i read from you

inspirational…bottom line, 9.8/10, highest rating i have given
Chaos Theory (RIP Bob Clark) | Feb 09, 2010

Gandhi

Gandhi
Gandhi (1982)

IMDB rating: 8.20

Plot: When ‘Mahatma Gandhi’ (qv) first set foot in British India, he had already been to Britain and South Africa, and had created quite a stir for the betterment of the people. But in India, he realized that he had first to live the life of a peasant to understand what it is to be an Indian. This resolve will lead him to shed his westerners clothing, and don a simple loincloth, be subjected to racial slurs from none other than Winston Churchill (Half naked Indian Fakir); Mobilize awareness of local industry and less dependence on imported clothing and material; the historic dandee march for withdrawal of the salt tax; a fast unto death to stop the virtual slaughter of British troops by irate Indian mobs; and be imprisoned several times. His resolve was to work with stalwarts such as Mohammed Ali Jinnah, Sardar Valabhbhai Patel, Professor Gokhale, J.B. Kripalani, Maulana Azad, and Pandit Jawarharlal Nehru to ensure first of all to get the British to quit India, and then run an Indian Government under the Congress party. Gandhi will soon realize that it is not enough to be just an Indian, for India has many facets – Muslim, Hindu, Sikh, Jewish, and Christian. The British relied on these many facets as an excuse for their continuance as they wanted to ensure that the minorities are not oppressed by the Hindu majority. Concerned over the inroads made by Gandhi to unite the Hindus, Muslims, and all others under a common umbrella, the British invited Jinnah for talks, and it is here that a seed was laid for a separate country called Pakistan. When Gandhi came to know about this, he pleaded with Jinnah to unite the Muslims, even take over as the first Prime Minister with his choice of Muslim candidates for Parliament, but separatist Jinnah had already made his mind. The World Wars of 1914 and 1944 having taken it’s toll on Europe and Britain in particular, the weary British finally decided to leave India in 1947 – not the India they had conquered – but an India that was ready to be divided in East Pakistan and West Pakistan. Now after the much awaited independence was the real test for Gandhi – a test that will make him or break him – as he started a fast unto death to try and stop the violence that was threatening to break out into a civil war, not realizing that he had indirectly fanned Hindu extremism, which would later be called the Shiv Sena, into taking the matter directly in their hands to ensure that Muslims are kept out of their Hindustan forever.

Gandhi

Directors: Attenborough Richard

Actors: Kingsley Ben,Fox Edward,Gielgud John,Howard Trevor,Mills John,Sheen Martin,Charleson Ian,Fugard Athol,Halmer Gunther Maria,Jaffrey Saeed,Padamsee Alyque,Puri Amrish,Seth Roshan,Biography,Drama,History,

How should one prepare for the paper on mahatma gandhi's life in the mbbs entrance for mgims wardha?
What type of questions are asked and what can we read in order to get through the exam and also not spend much time on reading books on mahatma gandhi?


Mohanchand karamchand ghandhi the step father of the hindu nation hindustan

lashkar-e-hind | Mar 04, 2008


Hey i wrote that exam before one month it was a general question only.I think so they will produce u a small book just glance all the thing & write in ur own… some of the questions r gandhi kadhi’s,about his chilhood,frienship of gandhi etc….
Love is Life | Mar 04, 2008


watch movies 1)gandhi, 2)munnabhai mbbs 3) comics – bhartiya vidya bhavan publications.
http://www.bhavans.info/store/books.asp
charlatan | Mar 04, 2008

Doctor Bull

Filed under: Uncategorized — Tags: , , , , , , , , — jeromejackson1951 @ 2:24 pm

Doctor Bull
Doctor Bull (1933)

IMDB rating: 6.90

Plot: Dr. Bull is an old-fashioned country doctor whose affair with the widow Janet Cardmaker is creating waves in the small town where he practices. When there is a mysterious outbreak of typhoid which the doctor is slow in reacting to, it all comes to a head. The townspeople hold an emergency meeting and decide to give Dr. Bull the sack and bring in a new doctor. Dr. Bull must find a way to save his job, his reputation, and a young man’s life, whom all other practitioners have written off as a permanent invalid.

Directors: Ford John

Actors: Rogers Will,Lally Howard,Churchill Berton,Devine Andy,Morgan Ralph,Comedy,Drama,Romance,

Can I resume workouts 15 days after surgery?
I had a minor surgery 15 days ago (sebaceous cyst extraction) in my back and the rear side of my knee. The wounds look pretty good (pink and they itch sometimes), the surgery threads were removed 3 days ago by my doctor and it looks pretty much closed (the scars).

But still my doctor says I shouldn’t do sports in a week or so, I’m going to ignore him cause I love working out, I’m signed in for a soccer game tomorrow, what the hell!!!! What is the worse thing that could happen?? Nothing, I’m a young strong healthy man and I don’t care what the doctor says!!!!! That’s bull_shi.t that applies for smokers and drinkers, I’m better!!! :)


It would be best to ask your doctor, not people here who don’t know. NEVER after surgery do anything till your doctor has totally released you.
fllady61 | Jan 21, 2010

Imagine That

Imagine That
Imagine That (2009)

IMDB rating: 4.30

Plot: A financial executive who can’t stop his career downspiral is invited into his daughter’s imaginary world, where solutions to his problems await.

buy online Imagine That and download

Directors: Kirkpatrick Karey

Actors: Antonacci Michael,Barney Brian,Bernhardt Dane,Christian Barron,Church Thomas Haden,Cox Ronny,Crank Skip,Davis DeRay,Derringer Robb,DeVito John,Faircrest Jonn,Graves Jr. Joseph H.,Graves Joseph,Greeves Adam,Hacker Todd,Comedy,Drama,Fantasy,

Girlfriend wants to take a year off.. help me please?
My girlfriend of about two months wants to take a year off and wait until she turns 15 to get together again. She wants to be friends but expects me to wait on her because we love each other. Normally, I would probably go for it because I would do anything for her but she wants to cut out all the romantic things out because she feels that will strenghten our relationship in the long run. I wouldn’t even be able to hold her hand much less tell her I love her. The reason for the year off thing is because she isn’t allowed to date until she is 15 and her mom found out we were together. Though both her parents seem to like me, they still wont let us be together until she is 15 and her birthday isn’t until January. But I love her so much I can’t imagine her being anything less than my love… It’s bad enough even if she didn’t want the year off because on average we only get to see each other 2 hours a week.. thats 8 hours a month.. and now that her mom found out we were dating, I am no longer allowed to text her through her phone.. instead her sister is being kind and letting me text my love through her phone for about an hour each day.. This is really starting to get to me because I worry that if we do split, we’ll just end up drifting apart and we might not get back together.. Please help me..

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